tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7144844961496270733.post270702689101714128..comments2012-01-03T12:34:48.738-05:00Donna Gambalehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00317767593205769881noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7144844961496270733.post-18730811949352082852012-01-03T12:34:48.738-05:002012-01-03T12:34:48.738-05:00...I found it interesting that, just like Marc plans to do, he basically stripped her of her battle uniform...1000th.monkeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16835988128285459745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7144844961496270733.post-709485938878084982012-01-03T10:41:26.965-05:002012-01-03T10:41:26.965-05:00Oh! She can&#39;t marry Marc. I really hope she follows her heart in the end. This was great.Charity Bradfordhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7144844961496270733.post-39231442407620898832012-01-02T23:25:06.910-05:002012-01-02T23:25:06.910-05:00Oh so steamy!! :Dcindyvoldsethhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11882270682230422885noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7144844961496270733.post-84536821338041621652012-01-02T18:38:31.678-05:002012-01-02T18:38:31.678-05:00My favorite line: &quot;In a single motion, he&#39;d undone the ties along the back and Ariel felt the heavy padding fall from her body.&quot; I&#39;ve always been a sucker for a man who knows how to work a woman&#39;s clothing.portrayaloftichwihttp://portrayaloftichwi.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7144844961496270733.post-39005685623397901072012-01-02T14:54:56.734-05:002012-01-02T14:54:56.734-05:00Excellent! Really made me want to keep reading (and wishing they&#39;d kiss already). I especially loved this bit: &quot;His mouth. It was a dangerous thing.&quot;<br /><br />Can&#39;t believe you didn&#39;t enter this blogfest before, Sara!Joanne Fritzhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08076959910493197255noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7144844961496270733.post-45566253675502102092012-01-02T14:01:15.199-05:002012-01-02T14:01:15.199-05:00Girl Knight. Loved the twist. Great tension. Thumbs up.jaybirdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10708353376256621965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7144844961496270733.post-21921117367245790532012-01-02T12:19:38.724-05:002012-01-02T12:19:38.724-05:00Ooh! HOT. I loved this!Larissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08874147599272424056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7144844961496270733.post-89321938566757829662012-01-02T11:57:23.820-05:002012-01-02T11:57:23.820-05:00I take it little brother was a tad jealous too.ralfasthttp://ralfast.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7144844961496270733.post-40182407241254347812012-01-02T11:05:03.759-05:002012-01-02T11:05:03.759-05:00GAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE!!!!!!!!!!Frankie Diane Mallishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06066659801542129040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7144844961496270733.post-13044010423120955652012-01-02T10:27:13.507-05:002012-01-02T10:27:13.507-05:00Oh so much sorrow and longing. Obligation is a horrible thing sometimes. I loved this &lt;3Loralie Hallhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07134452749240292803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7144844961496270733.post-53038398096456123392012-01-02T10:24:16.029-05:002012-01-02T10:24:16.029-05:00Ahh. I feel so sad for them! It&#39;s clear that they&#39;re totally in love just from this excerpt and I really, really want them to be together. Already I don&#39;t like Mark! Grr.Amalia T.http://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7144844961496270733.post-52367096653594277532012-01-02T09:59:55.540-05:002012-01-02T09:59:55.540-05:00A female knight = very cool. Great description and tons of tension. Nicely done! :DJon Paulhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07824815967445843124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7144844961496270733.post-77114508663301597052012-01-02T09:45:33.619-05:002012-01-02T09:45:33.619-05:00Interesting and fun. Thanks. I&#39;ll be backfarawayeyeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17578277501054242356noreply@blogger.com